Nice, obviously done by somebody who knows how to draw.

Great one ! But why not put the gray crayon in the shot

I think this would be better if you increased the contrast and lightened it a little. Is the slight purple tint on purpose?

just updated the picture,thnx friiskiwi ..you are right about the purple tint

Great idea. Wish I could draw that well. My one little quibble might be that the drawing is in black and the pencil is blue.

much better

Converting to B&W will get rid of the colour cast and the blue pencil wont look odd