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dads bread
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avatar magicsteve

Love the subject matter but I'd try recropping the image to make the basket more centered. Normally I'd advocate against that sort of thing but with so little negative space on the right side of the basket it just looks...off. Also, I'd try darkening the exposure a bit and bringing up your lights in order to really make the basket "pop" off of the background. Hope this helps! All the best!

author says:

thank you

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

I'd also change the camera angle to show off more of the bread, rather than the basket.

avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Don't know if you have darkened the image yet, but if you have it still needs to be a little darker to really make it stand out.

author says:

a little darker

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