The monorail get set to follow the line of the rail...even the green light points towards the line direction. (5 years and 2994 days ago)
Beautiful butterfly, but a bit too much to the right. Since the background is darker on that side, you could center this a bit more without too much of a "target center" effect. It would give it better balance.
unfortunately, the big black vertical makes it hard to follow the leading lines, even with the arrow. It's very dominant, visually, and the short handrail, while echoing the leading lines, contributes more to the visual "hemmed in, stop!" feeing.
A tighter crop cleans up this image. I still like the monorail cab that initiates the line direction. Better ?
A tighter crop cleans up this image. I still like the monorail cab that points to the line direction as well as the railing because it parallels the leading line. Thanks for your comments MossyB.
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