I can hear her...yada yada yada do it this way.... Nice action shot with story although it is a re enactment. No blow outs on white and full of white. I bet this would look great in monochrome as well.

The items are well displayed as a group. However, in an ad campaign where you are trying to sell the item, we need to see what the detail on the apron looks like.

Merry Christmas to you too! From the well saturated colour to the message the product is clearly seen in abundance. That is an expensive item for 10 Euros. Your photograph has good impact with sharpness well rendered and natural formating with good marginal space.

thanks still for the comments