@Nator Lmao well spotted

You used a flash didn't you?

No this was taken in St. Lucia mid afternoon.. Extremely hot and bright

......not according to the little one eating, they appear to be quite happy.....but I would look out for the shifty looking character behind you.................

I think if you crop it so the child is out, it could look like people are nervous about something/someone over to the left. But the kid makes it lose its film noir "edge"

I thought about cutting the child, but it would loose to much of the image, and even in a film noir, there would be 'innocents', totally unaware of what is going on around them.

Well, it's your picture, of course. But I think if you cropped off the right (the kid) and the top, you'd increase the tension about a million percent.

Mark, You are so often, quite right. The change has been made.

Personally, I like it. That guy behind the lady doesn't look happy... and WHAT'S he hiding in his left hand, behind the woman's head?! Good Luck

much better, well done.

great shot, gl

Well done author, best of luck