Forget the kids... bring me one!

Nice job. Clean, simple and beautiful.

Lovely shot, but the colours aren't the best, I would convert to black and white and increase the contrast a little.

Thanks for the comment. I actually quite like the colors. Made them that way completely on purpose, with a yellow/blue tone split.

That's fine.

I like this photo,it says something

Those kids look pretty happy

Try adjusting the white balance

A bit dark at the top, which looks kind of weird, but a cute nose!

Thank you MossyB, I let her sleep on the floor and put her hair as backgound this is why it is dark at the top, I wanted to keep it as it was but I felt people will tell me the flip it so this is it!

I'm not talking the hair, author, I'm talking the overall low value of the top part of the image - The forehead is barely visible, the tone is so dark.

Thank you MossyB, now I know what you are referring to! I will try to fill it with some flash or just keep it as it was colored.

Much improved, author, now the nose is the focal point, and is not competing with the shadow for attention.

Thank you MossyB, I appreciate your comments for improvement!