constructive criticism is welcome, through messages or comments.
I started my passion for photography two months ago, And welcome advice.

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I guess that this is a set up / composition (theres no way that old phone has that kind of headphones,how silly of me )which is a good one (creative enough for my taste).
Since it's a composition i think that that the whole phone & headphones should be on the frame ( a wider frame that includes both of them).
The way the photo looks now is like it's a snap shot (like you didn't had the time to frame it the way you wanted).I don't know if you can re-shoot it but if you can i suggest a wider frame (IMHO)!
All so a have a question about the background.Is it a piece of white paper?

thank you for your input on the headphone shoot..
the headphones are bluetooth, which work as a phone as well as music from my PC. so thats what made me think of the old wall phone...the wall phone is actually hanging on my wall, I used dim lighting to keep shadows off the wall (which is white) and over exposed this photo to give the appearance there was no backdrop at all with this POV..
Out of frame...I'm glad you mentioned that..I took several shots of this and and found this one more appealing to my eye...I think it because it leaves something left to the imagination when I look at the photo...I am curious to hear what others think of tthat...
I am going to review the other shots I took, and may try for another with improvement...
I really do appreciate your input, It was very constructive. I am a beginner and eager to learn..Thank you Tomas