Honestly author...Was this photo your BEST choice for this contest?
Sorry if i am wrong but this is actually a snap shot.
Theres no composition,no feeling,no mood in the shot!
The guy looks that is boring to death...
Once again sorry if i am wrong but lets try to raise up the quality of the entry's on this site.
Don't just search you HDD to find a photo that "fits" the contest.
If you don't can't / want to take a photo don't submit an entry that don't stand much of a chance!
All this is just my opinion author & i am sorry if i insulted you or your model in any way!!!

This is actually my son leaving for uni for the first time, not posed but a real thoughtful expression. Sorry if it's not arty enough for you but we all have to start somewhere.

Very good shot, great expression

it has also been selectively blurred to vignette, which is not allowed!

Thanks adeincyprus, I did not realise soft focus was not allowed, I have taken it off.

I got to say, the dash is distracting.

This it is.I'll take the image to the... butcher and see what can be done

Better but I'd crop that bar off the top

TOTALLY!

Nice but watch out the volcano clouds!...

Pretty good! That DOES look like a plane

lol love it

Excellent shot, great find ! I saw the plane the at the first glance, Good luck

great find! GL