(5 years and 2784 days ago)
Seems a bit cramped on the right side with the table edge cut off, while the left side shows empty space.
(5 years and 2784 days ago)
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Taken at a gallery show (5 years and 2917 days ago)
Seems a bit cramped on the right side with the table edge cut off, while the left side shows empty space.
In my opinion too many distractive elements for a painting picture, good luck!
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(5 years and 2993 days ago)
The leading lines are VERY direct here! It's a nice composition, with the positioning of the light house really well thought out, but you've managed to angle the horizon to bisect the picture plane at almost the exact middle...This would have been much stronger if you'd been able to hold your camera higher (my husband actually has a step ladder in his trunk for this type of thing), so that the horizon line would be a bit lower...Rule of Thirds, don't 'cha know...
Thanks MossyB - yep its frustrating about the horizon, I wanted to keep the lighthouse in the thirds and the line trying to be a diagonal lead it, but just couldn't get the horizon right as well.
Beautiful, and the image is so strong, that you tend to overlook the horizon.
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Douglas Head Lighthouse, Isle of Man
Taken using bracketing and merged to HDR with Photomatix
(edit:horizon straightened slightly) (5 years and 3069 days ago)
Nice... might be good to see a bit more than of the sea
Nice. I think it could do with the horizon straightening just a tad.
It's a little flat, I would increase the black a little.
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wonderful ,Postcard pretty
wish i could walk there now
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