The lighting looks a bit odd - The tones are too warm, overall - she looks like she's been into the spray tan too heavily, and the contrast of the lighting makes her cheek area look almost "blown out" bright...

sweet

Well MossyB! All made in purpose, I took the shot with no flash to make her face look like Chocolate, she is at the end my "Little Chocolate Love"
But thank you any way!

Friiskiwi, you are the sweetest person ever! Thank you!

I love the tones here. I see nothing wrong with them. My only concern is the focus but the tones are great and the framing is awesome. The idea to get that chocolate look was a good idea and nicely executed! Very pretty girl

Thank you Nator! She enjoyed every second yesterday being my model!

Thank you MnMCarta! Because I did not use the flash I think the focus was a little off!
I appreciate that a lot! Thank you again for your lovely comment! She is my sweetheart!

Great shot and love the idea to use the chocolate as "make up" It would be a great photo if the focus not a little bit off, or probably taking another round of photo and chocolate session as she enjoyed it very much Probably making the "cat" make up? And pre-focus and tripod would help as I assume, it's low light environment

Yes Riady! Thank you so much for your advice, much appreciated!
I wish I could re-shoot but she is down with the flu now, maybe when she feels better I will take your comments in consideration and make another shoot project me and her!

That's a cute little chocolate lover. I like the lighting and the tone myself. Nice picture equals nice vote.

Thank you lchappel! Much appreciated!

Reminds me of the scarecrow in the Wizard of Oz - cute

Yes fallingHorse lol, thank you so much!

relax

The girl looks great... the guy could at least crack a smile

He was being cooperative and silly until I raised my camera...then this.

happy-unhappy?

I like everything about this snap!!

really lovely

Very nice DOF

Congratulations on 2nd and 3rd place, lovely photographs.

Saturation is really impressive....