Sharp on the eyes GOOD. I do think a bit of skin softener would enhance this beautiful face. I can feel my eyes fighting between her eyes and those teeth back and forth and back and forth. Nice dof and the pose is very comfortable. Crop is appropriate with marginal space.

Thanks for the observations. The image was pre-advice earlier about skin softener. I also wondered whether the image was just too bright. I think I have a tendency to overcook adjustments a little.

those are cute I have to listen to that song, I don't know it

Great colours.