A little bit too much flash I think. I think cropping your subject to where she is the only one in the shot would help. Oh and in my opinion (IMO) she doesn't really look like she's that taken off guard.

was thinking that myself..........looks like she was watching the camera as well as munching on goodies...

Mmmm, guys, It was quite a time ago, so I can't tell exactly, was she watching me or not. If you think it is off topic, please give me some time to change the picture.

I've changed the picture. This one is definetely off guard.

Now you have pictures that are similar to each other. Obviously the next one is also yours. Still a matter of opinion but he doesn't really look too taken off guard.

jawsh, about two similar pictures... Sorry, I've realized it when submitting for the contest ended. About off guard... You are wrong, it was unexpected for the boy, and he knew he didn't supposed to take this stuff, next minute after shot he hid this stuff behind his back. This is the fact, and you entitled to your own opinion, of course.

thi sone is still good

nice...think I remember this one from the last contest...

Not for long

Someday I will ollie