A harsh flash rarely gives a great photo. The shadows on the left also detract from the photo. I'm not convinced that this portrays 'obesity' the meal looks quite healthy and if the person is fat, we don't see enough of him/her to tell.

Thanks for the comment!
it was a very good critique i appreciate it

I'd say its technically on theme (the man in the picture is obviously a larger person) but I agree that it could have been implemented a bit better. Maybe reshoot and resubmit?

Agree with both! it does look a bit healthy to me and the flash is a bit distracting but i believe it is on theme! well done author