- Camera: SONY
- Camera model: ILCE-6300
- Exposure time: 1/50
- Aperture: f/4.0
- ISO: 200
(5 years and 382 days ago)
(5 years and 382 days ago)
The little statues are charming. You did a wonderful job of cloning the poles out of the scene.
I personally find the brightly coloured background a bit distracting. Have you tried it in BW?
I have but colour is a bit more exciting because it matches the music they are playing...thank you
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My aim was to capture a silhouette against a sunset. Please see SBS for my post processing explanation.
Any tips for improvement will be greatly appreciated. (5 years and 382 days ago)
Hi,
Here are my few thoughts on your image and post processing.
You mention that you wanted to achieve a silhouette against a nice sunset and you succeeded.
The time for silhouettes is morning light or setting sun light. You did a good job of cloning out the shadows that your hood created, however, it gave a vignette type of look which wasn’t all that bad but it wasn’t what you were gunning for.
The clone job nicely done, although you have some still showing through. If you try varying opacity layers as you clone you can further eliminate that without the telltale signs of cloning showing through.
Horizon is now straight. Details in shadows are more easily recovered when an image is underexposed, so when in doubt shoot underexposed rather than over. RAW or not RAW.
I like your image because the silhouette gives emotion or rather mood…you are a romantic at heart. Overall the image is a bit busy, following the KISS principle seems to work better for silhouettes…a strong dark focal point…uncluttered. My two cents worth.
Thanks for the feedback Olga. It's very much appreciated.
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Please view this in high resolution to see the effect clearly.
Post processing involved Picassa photo storage software, free download, available from Uncle Google.
The process:
1. Crop photo.
2. Pencil sketch available in Picassa.
3. Worked with tones, shadows, highlights lever.
4. Added saturation because pencil software render it b/w only.
My Goal for using this technique was to highlight the veins and lines in the cabbage patch.
Original photo is in SBS as per contest rules.
(5 years and 384 days ago)
Very nicely done. The pencil sketch is subtle and highlights the veins beautifully. You also brightened the highlights well. The end result has a lot more light than the original.
Not sure what you mean by adding saturation to the pencil sketch?
Adding saturation to a black and white image doesn't make it coloured.
A suggestion for improvement....
Select highlights only and feather the selection by about 30-50 pixels. Copy it and paste on a new layer. Then change the blend mode to soft light. You can then change transparency to suit your taste. That should add another lighting effect to make it look like some sunlight is shining on the cabbage patch. Try it and see what you think.
Hi, in the pencil mode the image is only b/w but when I used the "saturation boost" button the colour flooded back in so the green came back.
I'm not sure I understand how to "feather the selection", how do you do that? You do know that I am photoshop challenged.
Thank you.
When you open photoshop, there is a box at the top labelled feather. Just type the amount of pixels into that box and any selection tool will automatically select a feathered edge. Remember to change it back to zero when you want sharp edge selections.
This video will show you what I am talking about.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og2frHOjpnA
I will just take your word for it re the saturation boost. I don't have Picassa so I have no clue how it works.
thank you ...I've bookmarked that link but am wondering if dodge and burn would do the same thing?
It most likely would but it would take a lot longer than just adding a soft light layer.
Congratulations on scooping the pool. Well done.
Thank you
Congrats for 1,2 and 3
ummm there wer
Thanks
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What an amazing difference between the before and after. I really like the high key treatment. Did you do that with a filter or just by adjusting levels and brightness?
The ninja pose also seems to follow the lines of the background which makes a very pleasing composition.
Hi, yes that is Nik Software High Key Filter which is nice because it has dynamic and standard lever and in playing with those levers details can be brought out. Thank you for your comments, very appreciated.
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