Nice pose and girl, but the very bright light is disturbing.

Nice shot, but I think the light is a little close. Moving it back so only a little bit appeared at the lower left might have been a little less distracting. (could have had a secondary light source off camera if needed)

nice shot but i agree with vibeke , the light is disturbing ... gl

Nice set up but I agree with the others about the light. Even a softer lightbulb in the lamp could have achieved what you may have been going for. Good Luck.

i have other pictures like this with the light bulb less brighter ,but then the subject is too dark,so i prefer this one ,with no editing