lovely mood.

Excellent shot, but its a little too dark. Lighten it up a bit and I'd say you have an awesome photo on your hands! All the best!
(Oh, and upload a high res if possible. That will increase your chances of getting a better score.)

thx steve for your advice, im still a beginner to this site im not sure what i can and cant do with the photo, is there a link for the rules regarding what i can do to a photo, and i will upload high res

Welcome to the site, you can find the rules here,
http://www.pxleyes.com/guidelines/photography/
Good Luck, and remember to tick, 'Upload full resolution'
Also consider the 'rule of thirds', I would crop a bit off the left side, and possibly some off the bottom, but not totally sure on the latter.

i made my photo brighter now, would i have to summit as a new entry or could I swap this one with my new one ? and thx for the advice

You can swap it. Save a hi-res too. Good luck Author.

It now has a lovely light.

Yes, the lighting is much improved.

This is a wonderful idea. However you may want to consider shooting in another location, just my opinion.