The "halos" around the building and on the far RH side are distracting, and throw the values balance off, hurting the composition, but the detail of the building itself is very nice.

Thanks for your valuable feedback MossyB Reduced the effect of the halo and also reduced the saturation to emphasize of "aged" and "historical" value of the building

much better

love your all shot man
well taken
love it
good luck

Nice - the sky really suits the building too

Wonderful work author! Lovely shot!

Nice Job Congrats

The shadows overall are still too dark, and the sun on the left is too bright, with the values blown out (notice the white glow behind the buildings). I'd crop the sun and the curved portion of the wall on left, and then adjust the levels of the image to make it more "readable," instead of so dark, but that's just me.

this is amazing shot author
love it
high vote and fav from me
just brilliant man
best luck

Perhaps next time take the shots in 'portrait' rather than landscape layout - you will need to take extra shots for the overlap but whne it comes time to stitch them you wont lose the top of the shrine

Thanks for the suggestion Fallinghorse, the shots themselves were taken in the portrait, it's just I don't use DSLR instead I was using Canon powershot with its default lens and there is not room behind me to take the shot from the same angle Shrine of remembrance 2 was waken with DSLR that can cover the whole building that I shot later one (1 year later) after buying DSLR ;p

WOW! Cool picture!

I understand author - I wondered about the difference. A marked improvement too I may add

Very Australian, well done

Or New Zealand

Yes, so true Mellanieb

bravo author.......sometimes simple is best!

Nice shot ! The candle light gives a terrific atmosphere ! (I prefer this one in B/W than the other)