Great DOF, and subject is crystal clear. I think off centered images are more appealing. But imo, there's a little too much background showing on the right. Make the image feel as though somethings missing.

A bit too dark on the right, you can barely make out the screen above the microphone. A bit more contrast would have helped this.

Probably right, but too late to change. Actually I spent two weeks in a sound booth doing a voice over of a mental health book and this was the actual atmosophere to keep me on theme. I was so happy to get out of that booth that I didn't think about the lighting. Good suggestion. Thanks.

Looks like a successful test! GL!

I like the fish eye here, well done.