I feel bad critiquing a shot that you love so much, but I can't help but feel this would be better if there was a stronger focus on the flowers in the foreground. This shot does have a nice vintage feel to it though.

Nice effect, but I have trouble finding what's in focus.

it was supposed to be the white flowers..=[ sorry im so amateur

not exactly a close up.....is it?

keep working on your technique, you obviously have a good eye, and that is much harder to learn.

thank you friiskiwi i will practice!