I like it, but i think that if you worked more on shadows and highlights it could really improve this image, for example the branches lookm a bit flat. Good luck.
That's a funny looking bird. Nice work on the flowers. Some suggestions for improvement: move some of the feathers to before the legs. Also look a the feet: at the point of the feet the branch looks flat.
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
agrees with dustfinger
author says:
thank you all for comm . i moved the feathers in front of legs, i worked on the highlights and shadows for the branches.
I agree it is a little on the MAD MAG side. lovely, fun image.
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
I believe Alfred E. Neuman is copy-righted. (the guy on the cover of every Mad Magazine) You also provided so source links for the arms or Alfred E. Neuman's face.
jawshoewhah what are you talking about? Do you even know? He made it LOOK like alfred e neuman, its not actually him. Try and learn not to be so quick to be critical and actually look at the work.
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
I expect the author to get defensive but WHO ARE YOU? I still think it looks like Alfred E. Newman. The tooth missing, the freckles. Classic Alfred. Thanks for at least providing source links
What does it matter who I am. So what it looks like Alfred, thats not illegal. The image is the orignal source for this contest not actually a trade marked image.
gud work
nice work
Awesome!
I like it, but i think that if you worked more on shadows and highlights it could really improve this image, for example the branches lookm a bit flat. Good luck.
great work!
Lovely
fun creative image. I like the bird and the little white flowers. The butterfies give a nice depth of field to your work. WD.
That's a funny looking bird. Nice work on the flowers. Some suggestions for improvement: move some of the feathers to before the legs. Also look a the feet: at the point of the feet the branch looks flat.
agrees with dustfinger
thank you all for comm . i moved the feathers in front of legs, i worked on the highlights and shadows for the branches.
Great job on the idea of breaking things apart to create something so original. Good Luck!
It's better now.
very nice
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