The other text on the paper is blurred, maybe you shuoldve blurred the "EXPIRED" text a bit.. just to make it fit in some more Either haha

Why is she in a grayscale and the rest of the image is color? It just seems to make more sence to make it all color or all grascale. Perhaps you could explain.

I know its more cool that the colors would be opposite but I really wanted Momma to look so old and weary that is why I grayscaled her and added color on the background... I blurred the other text on the paper to emphasize the word EXPIRED... Now you know...

I understand why you did it, and this is one of the better entries. Did you try leaving the colour in her clothes but just desaturating her skin a bit, that might get the emphasis across but still be a bit more realistic. GL

I gotcha now, because everything old was in black and white. Then you might want to make the "expired" gray as well, since it's just as old as her.

RayTedwell & jawshoewhah thanks for your comments but it is my own discretion. Heheh!

i had to see your sbs to notice her. she looks like a dude. with a beard. i'm not sure if you were going for that and there's really no point of having her in frame in the corner..

I agree with elficho.

I don't get the joke, sorry.

I have no idea why that's a yo mamma joke?!?! Are we missing something in translation?

Please read between the lines jawshoewhah & RayTedwell... Heheh!

I don't understand either, sorry author.

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I'm glad I'm not the only one who doesn't get it.

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You have a distorted image. . . Needs improvement

I know I was working with limited source and had to blurr everything to make it look better even though now it looks out of focus. Any suggestions?

Goldfish are not green. They are "gold", hence the name.

Not all goldfish are gold jaw... Now you know... Different Specie, Different Color...

It would of fit the joke better if it was gold and not green.

still needs a lot of work, why does the green stop at her neck and the rest of her is blurry?

RayTedwell & jawshoewhah thanks for your comments but it 's how I interpret the statement or joke. Heheh!

This could do with a lot of work, for example i agree about the green goldfish and I also agree with RayTedwell, what was the point in blurring her bottom half?

very nice