not bad at all...my thoughts ,like Nators are possibly skew on the bike a little bit to refine it's alignment
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I DID skew the bike. Look at the SBS how it was originally.
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Thanks again Nator and CMYK. I was going to do something like this to start with but I guess the image of the two images seems to look more lively with the original background. I was trying to go in a new direction with the theme, but after using your suggestions, it does look better this way too.
barnacle, trust me on this, I did that already and it didn't look right. I was trying to create the blend from tattoo to reality and well, I think I have achieved that just about as close as possible. Thanks again for everybody's comments. Much appreciated.
It'll always be hard to get the perspective right as the tat was not drawn to scale or with a perfect perspective. I think youve done a very good job getting it as close as you have (and nice job cutting it away from the overly cluttered image you had in before). Great work.
the yellow snake is a bit bright. You should take the brightness down on it or maybe burn the head a little. The snake on the right is transparent through the dress strap and the bottom snake.. it doesn't seem to have a body. Personally I'd crop this down because of all the distraction going on around the main subject. IMO, I think removing the bottom snake and just keeping the two would look more realistic.
The red strap on the right side of the image has a feeling of protrusion...Well it adds to the effect but also distracts a bit as the two brown snakes are tough to distinguish.
The wing shadows are a bit too dark, also you could check out the vanishing point for the shadows with your light source. A bit too much blur with the flying one, maybe?
I don't think you need to change a thing. The shadow & brightness of the flower make it stand out and feel as if it's coming alive, which fits the contest theme...good luck!
Might be better just to use the front bike...
I was thinking the same thing but this way it looks more lively I guess.
Suggestions for improvement have been implemented. Thanks.
not bad at all...my thoughts ,like Nators are possibly skew on the bike a little bit to refine it's alignment
I DID skew the bike. Look at the SBS how it was originally.
Thanks again Nator and CMYK. I was going to do something like this to start with but I guess the image of the two images seems to look more lively with the original background. I was trying to go in a new direction with the theme, but after using your suggestions, it does look better this way too.
Love this, great idea. Small bit of white leftovers on the bottom of hte front wheel tho, little bit distracting.
Amazing work.....
Good job!
Nice work GL
barnacle, trust me on this, I did that already and it didn't look right. I was trying to create the blend from tattoo to reality and well, I think I have achieved that just about as close as possible. Thanks again for everybody's comments. Much appreciated.
nice job there, good luck to you...
You did acheive it very well well done
It'll always be hard to get the perspective right as the tat was not drawn to scale or with a perfect perspective. I think youve done a very good job getting it as close as you have (and nice job cutting it away from the overly cluttered image you had in before). Great work.
great job.gl
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