nice composition...great colors...house proportion are a bit out of perspective...try to fix that this work have potential...good luck

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nice work...guy is to big for the house...try to fix that

I agree with erathion; or resize the man smaller, or the house larger.

thanks for ur advice, i will make changes.

nice color on this one! good luck author!

Very nice work and good colors...but a bit to minimal use of source,u could made house from the source,moon too and some other parts

Who's never felt like that before?

Nice work author...i like window reflection...good luck

flames arent so convincing, fireman isnt very blended, and the girl's colour doesnt fit in, but i like the idea
EDIT: The flames are much better, and the girls fits better! , very good

thanks for your advice! I went back through it and fixed it

Hi author - nice idea but im guessing the opacity on the fireman layer is too low as I can see right through his body to the bricks on the wall. The ladder also seems ghostly. Good entry though!

thanks..ill i have to fix those!!!

Did you notice the smoke forms a figure of a head???

WOW!! i didnt even notice that...very interesting lol

If I were you I'd make the smoke less see-though and I wouldn't blur the flames so much. You can also use a light effect (filter-render-lightning effect) and you can make a few shadows. Anyway good luck author !!

Not only the smoke has a head-shape, but on the window over the girl I can see a face with a pair of white eyes... Imagination or fact? It's getting scary!

WoW..maybe my building is the haunted one!!!!!!! lol

Lol erikuri you are right ! this entrie is becoming pretty scary :P!

Flames looks unnatural...look at bottom edges of the flame...how metal fence could burn,i think that was first version was way better...try to fix entry,have a potential....