Funny idea, but the dog is kinda blurry. No problem, because that can be because of the movement. The edges from the dog however are very sharp, so if you could match that with the rest of the dog would improve the image, imo. Good luck!
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
I think a day image for a background would have been a lot better.
Poor Benji was born with only his back legs. :(, but as you can see he is enjoying life to the full. Make use of what you are given and work with it !! (5 years and 3558 days ago)
nice mood your making there. there seems to be two lightsource from the clouds; it's too bright for the stars to be seen yet and some of the clouds seems to be behind the stars. lastly, a lot of dogs running syncronously is a bit odd. nice image though and i like the mood here.
author says:
You mean you've never seen a pack of synchronized dogs run wildly through a field on a dimly lit day with the stars shining brightly? haha... Well the stars were supposed to be more of a borderish thing, not really supposed to elude to night at all, so oops on that one. The two light sources were intentional to imply a cloud breaking the light source into "two"..... and I like synchronized dogs...lol
the lightrays wouldn't supposed to be on the same angle then, and the dog would have stronger shadow with that strong light...just my observation. good work though!
nice work... didn't under stand the dog's intention there.. are they going to attak her... the three dogs seems like that but the other dogs that are far dosent look like so...and the lights are still strange.. looks like they are coming from two different angle.. else is very good and nice mood created... very well done and Gl. Author..
Thanks for all the input! I can see I could definitely have made the lighting a little better, directionally and more shadows, I was just trying not to overdo it with the shadowing actually! Anyways, thanks to all, your critiques are very valuable.
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Funny idea, but the dog is kinda blurry. No problem, because that can be because of the movement. The edges from the dog however are very sharp, so if you could match that with the rest of the dog would improve the image, imo. Good luck!
I think a day image for a background would have been a lot better.
Nice image. good luck
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