Nice, but I would darken the letters a slight, hard to see. Also with the text; Move "that" down a step. It´s to close to the scull.
Maybe you can have it "not centered". Otherwise good job!
Very innovative to interpret "card" as business card and I always like when the entry goes beyond the basic requirements to provide some context (the hand in this case). I think we can all relate to the sentiment, but apparently its wordiness necessitated squishing the letters which makes it a little bit difficult to read IMO. The skull graphic seems totally arbitrary (why a skull?) and I question going outside the dimensions of a standard business card -- which is maybe being too practical, but I do think an unexpected message in a standard format is the point of this contest. Also, I would expand the title to "Nice to meet you. Here's my card." (if that much length is allowed). {Would "Nice meeting you. My card." fit?} [BTW a comma after "view" wouldn't take up much space.]
Funny and a different "take"on the format. I don't see a particular reason for a skull either but that doesn't bother me at all. BTW DanLundberg, you wouldn't put a comma in front of a conjunction such as but or and. That wouldn't be proper grammar.
Creative idea. I would move the open card forward and closer to the closed card. Cropping out a lot of the unnecessary background might make the text legible without going to hi-res. The "(open)" is wholly extraneous [I'm sure even stalkers know how greeting cards work ]. You start out by saying "no words will ever be enough," but words are what you're offering. I would replace the "so..." line with something like "but let me try..." Also, I would start only the first line with a capital letter and I would put a comma after "feel."
@DanLundberg: thank you for the suggestions... You are right, but now it's kinda late for me to edit it more, I just cropped it a little. But I'll keep in mind your good advice for further entries! Tx
And thank you all for the comments
Quite funny . Perhaps an idea to make the text from the outside in white, right now in black it's a bit hard to read in the kinda dark background. Good luck!
The texting abbreviations are what really make this work. Not clear why you distorted the hand. Also, the I is not centered above the U on the front and the angled version of the front doesn't have the purple triangles in the corners.
Cool, looks real ;D
Nice, but I would darken the letters a slight, hard to see. Also with the text; Move "that" down a step. It´s to close to the scull.
Maybe you can have it "not centered". Otherwise good job!
hehehe..
Pretty good
Several points of view make the difference
Great...love this...good luck author
Very innovative to interpret "card" as business card and I always like when the entry goes beyond the basic requirements to provide some context (the hand in this case). I think we can all relate to the sentiment, but apparently its wordiness necessitated squishing the letters which makes it a little bit difficult to read IMO. The skull graphic seems totally arbitrary (why a skull?) and I question going outside the dimensions of a standard business card -- which is maybe being too practical, but I do think an unexpected message in a standard format is the point of this contest. Also, I would expand the title to "Nice to meet you. Here's my card." (if that much length is allowed). {Would "Nice meeting you. My card." fit?} [BTW a comma after "view" wouldn't take up much space.]
Funny and a different "take"on the format. I don't see a particular reason for a skull either but that doesn't bother me at all. BTW DanLundberg, you wouldn't put a comma in front of a conjunction such as but or and. That wouldn't be proper grammar.
Much better after the changing. GL
i like the skull, it sets the mood for the business at hand
what a nice card lol
Cool, business card
Great idea......gl
cool entry, author! GL
nice job
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