Please, turn on the fans
Would it be a sin

Funny

...Is this happened only in the church or could be in some other temple...This message say:"go to church before Sunday lunch"...lol

buahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha!!!

LOL!

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Good luck with that...

Hilarious content, but execution could be stronger IMO. I would delete "Card to my ex!" and make it the title (without the the exclamation mark). Format the three purple introductory lines to the rhyming couplets identically: left justify by the image's left edge, initial cap, and end with an ellipsis (three periods). Plus in intro two I'd change "i" to "I'll" (with a cap I) and in intro three I'd capitlize both "i"'s. Start each couplet with an intitial cap, end each first line with a comma [first couplet is the outlier on these first two items], and end each second line with a period [final couplet deficient]. In couplet two, it's "I'm," "that's," and "I" (capital I's and apostrophes). In couplet three, I would replace "until" with "but." The simple white background is kind of boring. The lower dark-gray segment on the heart might be more interesting as a drop shadow.

:o

So... it means that he changed his mind, his side... Crazy!

Best of Luck.....

cool entry gl

good luck

Good luck.

Very nice...lol...good luck

Amusing with a fun bottle illustration. However, the red-and-white-striped background nearly overpowers the card IMO.

i dont get it...

Is Your Name Maple Syrup? It should be, YOU SAP!!

sap·head
   /ˈsæpˌhɛd/ [sap-hed]
–nounSlang.
a simpleton; fool.
Origin:
1790–1800; sap1 + head

Maple Syrup is made from Maple Tree Sap.. Sap is a pretty big insult in some English Cultures.. and New England Area.. especially Vermont

Oh, I didn't know that - it's good to know to not make a gaffe!...
But I like maple syrup...

HEEHEEEEEEE!!! Luuuv it!!!!

great

GL

good luck

Love the idea of a superficially sweet image that turns out to be evil when you actually read the text BUT I personally think lavender tones with an overdone floral background would be sweeter coupled with a larger, more flamboyant and curvy italic font [e.g., Kunstler Script in two or three slightly overlapping lines] for the text (ending in a slap-in-the-face period [or full stop, if you're British] instead of an ellipsis).

simple words like this may mean a lot , very well done

Good luck.

GL

cruel gl author

nice

It should be I hate you :/
right!!!

i heat you too...

kewl!

You should lean the "I heat(hate) you" a little bit more so the perspective gets aligned with the card.

Pretty good.

thanks for all and i correct the mistake

The hands and the hearts (whole and broken) are virtually invisible, yet I believe they are an important part of the message. I think they need to stand out much more. I like how the front edge is cut in such a way as to lull the recipient into thinking that the message inside ends with "I love you." (I wish the interior of the open card looked like it were truly a perfect match of the partial interior seen with the closed card.)

EDIT: Cutting out even more of the lower front around the left side of the heart so the underlying "i" and a bit of the following long stroke on the start of "hate" is revealed to really mislead the recipient as to the conclusion of the real message would be even more compellingly evil and on-theme.

thanks for all thye give me advice and specially for (DanLunderg)

GL

great entry.. gl

good luck