Creative. I personally feel all the black space in the middle is excessive and starts to work against the "lighten up your business" slogan. I find it curious that the green glow in the front is the only light without rays going towards the sky. The yellow and red foreground lights need their bottom edges cut back so that it doesn't look like the front rims of their pots are emitting light (all the light should be coming from inside the pots). On the other hand, the right edges of the yellow and purple lights need to be a bit wider so they come right up to the edge of the pot rim.
author says:
i edited it after ur suggestions, dan. Thanks alot, you help always ... and the green that doesn't have rays... well that's the cookie :P
some of the light over laps the edge of the pots. just thought I'd let you know. otherwise a great idea and an an equally great job of turning it into an image.
very cool design - compared to your other colours, the white light looks a bit strong to me - I would have made it a tad more transparent. But hey, thats just my opinion
nice creation..good luck
A flying Yoshi! Soooo cuuuuuuuuute...
But I think it's a bit flat, need some shading... look at your reference to make it!
Very very cool work author...he is so cute...good luck
hey..... This is what calll ' the niccccce work' gl
Very cute entry....nice work. best of luck to you
very interesting work .......... all the best to author .........
congrats... great job!!!
Howdie stranger!
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