Domestic violence? My wish is doing the same thing to the monster who did that to her!!! Oops, sorry, author!
Very convincent effects, but band-aid is a bit tiny for me.
author says:
lol erikuri, I did that to her, thank you very much! :P
as for the aid band, don't they come in different sizes?
Re: band-aid. I think to my eye it's the pad that's out of proportion vertically, but it's just a nitpick. You've done a great job on the flesh discolorations...I know, because I got hit over my right eye by a falling ladder a while ago, and my shiner turned all of those colors...good luck!
Looks much better than the first, when using layer effects for things, remember to change the color of the bevel to a darker color of what the color of the thing you're beveling. When you you use black, it tends to have a weird effect. If you use the actual color but darker, it's more realistic.
author says:
thx all for the tips and comments, thx anna (you told me that layer effects thingy before but i forgot). i think the easiest way would be to just replace the aid band i made with a real one. but i don't have the time now.
Eye looks perfect,and very realistic,bruise in the corner of the mouth is great too,but the crack on the lips is not that convincing...i will hold my vote author,because i like this work very much and i want to give more points...
author says:
i've made some changes to that cut on her lip, i hope it looks better now, thx a lot erathion!
This is very realistic and this chop draws my eye totally in.
Author I give you high marks for this also
Excellent idea and choice of source image for this.
Very nice job. The cut on the lip looks excellent! The colors on the bruised eye look just a tad too bright (almost cartoonish). Other than that, great job! GL.
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High votes for the idea, and the way it´s so sad. I feel for this child (looks like a child when the mouth is covered wich I believe just higher my votes a slight more, that´s an effort hard to make, and makes the message even more touching).
Miner high votes for the work. The eye looks okey, the wounds seems more like paint, and the green under the cardboard is not a convincing bruise. You should try to opacify the wounds and make the bruise have more different colorising and not so blurred. GL
I think you blackened her eye a little too much. It doesn't look very realistic. I would try just using a closed eye source and making it blend to the face but the rest looks pretty good. GL!
author says:
was trying to make her eye like it isn't there anymore.. ya know.. like it had to be removed
The tear seems to drip from the wrong way, and if you do a darker line by her "lost" eye so it appears to be closed and badly beaten that would make the whole pic more realistic. IMO
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You´ve put together the sources very well, but the theeth are a too bright IMO. The stand out to much, locking to perfect. Also agree with the others about the bloodsplatter. Otherwise - good job! GL
Yeah.. I agree with the rest too.. You should remove or somehow blend in the blood splat around the nose.. It looks like its been just pasted on.. Other than that its a great entry and good luck!
how you guys can look at the entry long enough to make a critique without blowing chunks is beyond me.. I get queezy just thinking about what I'm looking at.. hehehe.. great job everyone
nice entry!.... few minor things.. the wound above the eye seems to have too much repetition... the blood dripping into the eye looks semi-unrealistic.. maybe change the blending on it.. as-well-as the blending on the cheek.. maybe it's just me tho
author says:
thanx westfall..driping blood into eye is now fixed and the one on the cheek too
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thanx for the fav Lamantine
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thanx for the fav SHIPLEYGIRL
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thanx alll
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Everything's good but the band-aid...look at a real one for reference. GL.
agrees with both. GL!
i fixed the band aid and tried to make her eye look more swollen, thx everyone for the tips!
Domestic violence? My wish is doing the same thing to the monster who did that to her!!! Oops, sorry, author!
Very convincent effects, but band-aid is a bit tiny for me.
lol erikuri, I did that to her, thank you very much! :P
as for the aid band, don't they come in different sizes?
Re: band-aid. I think to my eye it's the pad that's out of proportion vertically, but it's just a nitpick. You've done a great job on the flesh discolorations...I know, because I got hit over my right eye by a falling ladder a while ago, and my shiner turned all of those colors...good luck!
@CMYK: hmmm... falling ladder, huh!... Just kidding!... You must have seen stars!
>CMYK,......yes spinning blurry colored stars,....LOL,.....great work, master...
Looks much better than the first, when using layer effects for things, remember to change the color of the bevel to a darker color of what the color of the thing you're beveling. When you you use black, it tends to have a weird effect. If you use the actual color but darker, it's more realistic.
thx all for the tips and comments, thx anna (you told me that layer effects thingy before but i forgot). i think the easiest way would be to just replace the aid band i made with a real one. but i don't have the time now.
P.S. I do believe CMYK's story with the ladder...
Eye looks perfect,and very realistic,bruise in the corner of the mouth is great too,but the crack on the lips is not that convincing...i will hold my vote author,because i like this work very much and i want to give more points...
i've made some changes to that cut on her lip, i hope it looks better now, thx a lot erathion!
way better author...now is great...all is very very realistic...high marks from me and best of luck
This is very realistic and this chop draws my eye totally in.
Author I give you high marks for this also
Excellent idea and choice of source image for this.
Great idea Good luck!
Very nice job. The cut on the lip looks excellent! The colors on the bruised eye look just a tad too bright (almost cartoonish). Other than that, great job! GL.
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