Unique idea still needs a little work, white edges need to be removed from the end of the beams. And the dragon is looking a little flat you may want to see if can make it look more 3D and remove the loops from the head and tail.......
Thanks again Warlock, I have removed white edges and ring from dragon's head and tail. Dragon is actually flat knife but I have made some changes and also flipped it.
Good mood! Just a suggestion, you've got strong light on the dragon and the boy (coming from the left), but the trees show very soft light coming from above. You could try to give the trees also a strong light coming from the left. Good luck!
Like your idea, you should post a high res version.
Warlock [banned] says:
Very clever use of the source, I think the beams shadows are wrong for you image, the ones with the light face should be at the bottom and the dark face at the top.
Good job with such a simple idea. For some reason this reminds me one of those movie company logos, where that small boy is sitting on the half moon and there were clouds and stuff.. Dreamworks or something, perhaps?
great idea author and very nice work,but demands a bit more work to be perfect...look at the top parts of the towers,they don't look very realistic,play with parts of the buildings (perspective,angles and etc),and when u find right angle do some masking...i would like to see some improvement because this work have a great potential...i will hold my vote...good luck
Yeah. Very cool, but needs definitely some work with perspective. Especially the lower left buildings left edge needs some major tweaking. You should add the 'missing' windows and maybe lose the windows from the sharp edge and let it be steel or cover it with windowless skyscraper material or something. Definitely worth working a bit more.
Agree with the other comments - Really great image just let down slightly by the perspective not feeling right. I would remove the peaks from the bottom right tower and darken the bottem left tower. Great effort though. Well done.
Haha.. I was first like 'Oh shit.. some stupid dog heads copy pasted with a filter..' .. then I opened the entry and it was a lot better.. thank God. Very clever idea. I would maybe bend them a little to either way to make them appear even more like a slide. But it's a good image. It's so rare to see some meaningful use for the motion blur
Nice idea, I like it a lot. Agrees with CMYK, remove the shadow behind the hook, and also - motionblur the hook a little, ´cause the perspective of it makes you feel that it´s swinging towards you. GL!
author says:
Added a bit of motionblur on the hook to 'fix' the perspective issue - thanks sunzet
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
This is one of the better entries! GL!
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Great work author...idea is fabulous,mood too and amazing colors...best of luck
great work
cool !! good luck author .
aahahhaha i like this!
Unique idea still needs a little work, white edges need to be removed from the end of the beams. And the dragon is looking a little flat you may want to see if can make it look more 3D and remove the loops from the head and tail.......
Fantastic image, author! GL!...
Thanks again Warlock, I have removed white edges and ring from dragon's head and tail. Dragon is actually flat knife but I have made some changes and also flipped it.
Good mood! Just a suggestion, you've got strong light on the dragon and the boy (coming from the left), but the trees show very soft light coming from above. You could try to give the trees also a strong light coming from the left. Good luck!
Good story..... Great image.... good job!
Much improved good job!
excellent entry, well done
it is amzing ,good luck
Congrats for your first place, Nasir!
Congrats Nasir, beautiful work
hi,......congrats again on your winning......
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