Try to remove the white outline around the upper body.

@CMYK46 Thanks, I'm still learning this so any comments are welcome.

very cool idea! but, it would look better without the lettering on the ramp

nice work ! good luck

Good improvement, author! I think leaving the lettering from the original source was a nice touch. GL.

very cool work,nice different idea...gl

love the bluish touch

very nice approach author.. GOOD LUCK

Nice for a decoration.

Nice flowers, but you could organize them a little bit, to make a better composition. Now it seems like they're just laying there randomly without some aesthetic form. You could also try to make some nice leaves for them, would give some extra % from me. I would also perhaps move the few blurry flowers to the background and give more attention for the sharp ones.

nice work

Cool flowers.

so modernist

cool

Thank you very much

Nice.

interesting

wow love it

Wierd!

gr8

Very nicely done but can't decide if it 'works', is the hand supposed to be merging with the drum?