Simply converting the fancy bulbs into a fancy lamp is a bold approach in the face of likely CBR excess -- for which I commend you. I also like the crispness. The base seems very flat, however -- which captures the overall impression of just stacked elements with no interrelationship (such as cast shadows onto) with each other. Furthermore, I think lamps are more dramatic when they're turned on.
The lights on the metal are really twisted, since you duplicated the main source you got two light sources - one from the left and one from the right. I would applicate a bit more darkness to the bottom too.
I would add more contrast to the lamp parts. it will help it match the background. shadow wize I would just add some inner shadow to the lower side of the lamp parts
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Simply converting the fancy bulbs into a fancy lamp is a bold approach in the face of likely CBR excess -- for which I commend you. I also like the crispness. The base seems very flat, however -- which captures the overall impression of just stacked elements with no interrelationship (such as cast shadows onto) with each other. Furthermore, I think lamps are more dramatic when they're turned on.
ahha nice construction there!
Very creative author well done.
Howdie stranger!
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