The perspective is a bit off, making the helmet look crooked on her head, although that may have been your intention. She looks weird with no shoulders or arms, though.
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High res is quite nice.. just a suggestion (IMO) try duplicating and playing with blending options.. like multiply and overlay, to see if you can add a bit of density (the painting color is awesome)... love the color conversion and good luck
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good image hair outside the helmut is nice -- appears to be a stray line across his forehead
It's on the original also - strange.....
Work Updated.
Nice work, offsetting the model from the background works very well
best of luck 
Has a wonderful, strange and haunting mood to it. Very interesting image!
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