NICE IDEA

Dramatic!

Had to think twice - and it´s very cool!

i love the indirect humour created here

Lovely simplicity.

I really like this—u really understand the true meaning of type design.

gosh... that poem sent a damn chill down my spine dude.... words in image were very obvious of first look, well done and goodluck.

wow..dint get it at first look n now it appears awesome.. great concept!!..
gl author

hahahahaha...great thinking...well done author

No images, nothing as decoration and no textures

Author, this is a good image. Donarkz has some sort of a problem.

what problem? the lifeline symbol.. is that a shape? i have a shape in my design too and it got remove. thats my problem.

Thanks CMYK46 & thanks Donarkz for the comments.
Here is some explanation for the life line , there is no symbol it is just created from ww letters.

I really like this. But your SBS doesn't provide any support to your assertion that you created the 'life line' from double W's. [BTW a third-person singular subject {he, she, it/'apple'} almost always requires a present-tense verb that ends in 'S' {the opposite of plural nouns!}, so it should really be 'keeps.']

Thanks DanLundberg, for the suggestion. I will do the changes. Thanks !

It actually looks like a medical ad...lol. NICE ONE

Nice effect. It would be nice if you would translate what it means for all of us who don't know the language.

|| Om Namaha Shivaya || is the Sanskrit Shloka.

" || AUM NAMAH SHIVAY || "
above is written in devanagari
its a MANTRA reverin the holy God Shiva of the Hindus
its general meanin is
"adored be SHIVA"
AUM >> is a powerful sacred syllable in d hindu religion enchanted powerfully
it is a PRANAVA or SEED MANTRA/chant
it is known to b d most powerful syllable in d universe.....

@solkee hope this is clear
@author >> correct me if i`m wrong anywhere

gud job author

I agree with solkee; I'd like to know what it means...

@erikuree
i have already described d meanin.. sorry can`t detail it.. fear thumz dwns :p lol

Its a holy chant like for example ' in name of the lord '

very nice colors and great effects...good luck author

nice idea -- maybe would be better with some depth

nice play on a classic.. maybe add a layer above and multiply it to give it more density.. ack.. alan already suggested it.. good luck

@ Alan2641
@ Drivenslush

Thanks! thought it looked a little flat—ill fix accordingly

I like the use of shapes

now this is really cool! congrats on an awesome entry!

Mostly blurry...

Cute idea, but the 'p' is lost, looking more like a ball. Perhaps a white line (solid or dashed) in the center of the letters would help define the 'p' better, and give it more "road" cred.

Hi MossyB - I had wondered about that myself but the dotted line has me beat . I have worked on a modification and will upload it as part of the sbs for comments sake. I just dont specially like it.
Yes CMYK46 mostly blurry as you say You know Im extremely short sighted -f i didnt wear my glasses mostly blurry would be the theme of my life speed bumps in real life would be a total surprise.