A bit too high contrast. It's almost too bright to look at...Generally you only want to use "bright white" (with no toning or shading) very sparingly as highlight accents. Also, the columns look crooked, throwing the angle of the image off.
author says:
Thanks for the input i have tried to correct the angle of the columns and take on broad about the high contrast. I have updated the image so you can now at least look at it without your eyes hurting!
Unusual image ... I like it; I would like to see it printed as I think it might have more impact than on the screen. Sometimes the "light" can detract from softer, less contrasty images.
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author says:
Arca thanks for the comment. Printed on a canvas i think would look good. Would need more work though as only had a laptop and mouse pad to do this whole image.
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Idea is good, but the girl definitely needs legs (unless she's half human, half bird). If you flip the castle it will receive the same light as the mountains & I think you'll be better able to fix the main entrance (which is now fading away and has a bit weird perspective).
Now that I'm checking the composition (which is not bad), you may want to flip the mountain image, put the castle left on top (so it'll become higher) so you get a nice diagonal composition between the foreground (girl, right under) and the background (castle, right above). Just an idea. Good luck!
author says:
wazowaski, thank you for your constructive comment - I made the changes and it does look better thanks
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Cool,parallel dimensions
Nice! I like that you left a leg and an arm out of the ripple effect.
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