Great image, the SBS is (a bit) confusing, but i get what you did. It's a great idea and the foreground is awesomely made.
author says:
Lol Thanks for the heads up on the SBS, greymval. I was having a little trouble uploading it, so when I thought I finally got it right, I didn't bother to check. lol Its all scrambled up. I'll fix it right away.
great idea good job on the woman the veil looks great. my tip is name your sbs pics 1.2.3.... makes its easier lol.. good job
author says:
Thanks for the tip, bompy. I do label them 1, 2, 3...but...er, um...when I was uploading them, I put myself on autopilot and started to think about other things and when I came back, I discovered my autopilot had failed. lol Then I tried to unscramble the text and the pics and...well, anyway, its all fixed now. I checked this time. lol
Thank you for your votes and comments. L, its kind of like looking thru a dirty window now. Not the best, but I can work with it. Fewer sulks and pity parties anyway.
This is a nice image, but when I first saw it, my eyes were directed to the clouds, as they have a sharper highlight. If your main focus is the girl, just add some highlights to the yellow flowers on the left side, in the direction of the bright clouds, and this will bring the image together. Hope this helps.
Nice surrealistic entry author and great idea! I really like the background with the cracked structure in front and then the poppy field in the back. The idea with the chains is also very nice.
I have some suggestions though and a question. Did you place the girl intentionally in the thumb or did you want to place her on the hand? Because at the moment her legs go through the thumb of the hand. If that was wanted like, just ignore that part
However the position of the girl was planned, I think a shadow would ne nice, where the dress meets the hand.
And one more small thing: there is a "line", starting between her elbows going to the right side of the image. The top part of the trees there is lighter than the lower part. I'm not sure, what it is, maybe you forgot to erase something there.
Good luck!
author says:
Oh wow Elke, thanks a lot for this. I did not notice she was going through the thumb. I'll fix that asap.
Very nice surreal image author...I have few minor nit picks...part where chain ring meet stone would look better if u add some subtle cracks...u could use some brushes for that...also u need to mask just a bit better part where chain is connected with the finger and sleeve...mood is very lovely and with few tweaks this can be awesome entry...Once more, sorry for the nit picks...
author says:
You don't need to say sorry Nebojsa Thanks a lot for the nitpicks, i'll work on those asap.
Love it all...composition, colors....everything!! One thing that stood out was the tower on the left...not really in the ground just kinda hanging out? If that was the intention, ignore my previous comment But it would be kinda cool seeing it breaking through the ground causing the cracks Nonetheless I love it and Best of Luck author
Great image, the SBS is (a bit) confusing, but i get what you did. It's a great idea and the foreground is awesomely made.
Lol Thanks for the heads up on the SBS, greymval. I was having a little trouble uploading it, so when I thought I finally got it right, I didn't bother to check. lol Its all scrambled up. I'll fix it right away.
great idea good job on the woman the veil looks great. my tip is name your sbs pics 1.2.3.... makes its easier lol.. good job
Thanks for the tip, bompy. I do label them 1, 2, 3...but...er, um...when I was uploading them, I put myself on autopilot and started to think about other things and when I came back, I discovered my autopilot had failed. lol Then I tried to unscramble the text and the pics and...well, anyway, its all fixed now. I checked this time. lol
beautiful
Lovely image ... I can see the story in this image ... the figure on the beach completes it beautifully. Bravo Author!
Fantastic!
i love it ,very good work
Beautiful image... colors and light work nice......
gr8 thought
great work author...GL
Congrats Cheryl lovely work
Congrats for your first place, Cheryl! Your eyes are obviously better again
Congrats!!!
Thank you for your votes and comments. L, its kind of like looking thru a dirty window now. Not the best, but I can work with it. Fewer sulks and pity parties anyway.
Congrats, beautiful image. Hope everything continues to be better for you.
Congrats.... nice entry.
Congrats
Congrats!
Congratulations, Cheryl!
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