IMO if you got rid of the background and that apple and just had the banana car by itself in maybe a simpler back round it would be much better.
author says:
well at first i had it just floating in the air but with some terrain to ride stand on it looks way better imo.the apple seemed like a funny terrain for a banana car. the rainbow background thingy was just by lack of inspiration
I think the background doesn't favor the image. Removing and replacing with a more proper background it would be good
Also, it is a bit too unfocused under the banana, try sharping it so it matches the banana's sharpness, or get a different apple source.
author says:
changed the background
don't know its an improvement
sharpening the apple under the banana didnt work out
also cropped the whole thing down a bit
thanks for the tips btw
Use the Pen tool, author, to make those shapes/edges look better, you can stroke with eraser, afterwards blur them a bit. It's not a bad idea, honestly.
I quite like this! It's a very pretty and appealing piece. For mine, it's a little out of balance though, with such a large 'vase' and such small flowers. It has a lovely illustrative feel to it, but I think that the 'photographed' bananas in front detract from this. Perhaps if they were drawn it might have made the piece a bit more cohesive.
Anyway, well done.
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