This is not bad, except for her reflection on the puddle, a few masking problems and the minimal use of the source.
Instead the mood & composition work well.
This is a very nice composition but i have to agree with Greymval, the source provided for the contest played a very small roll in this....you could have just as easily done with out it.
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I think the butterflies and girl need to be better blended and adjusted to look as if they actually belong in this environment. Although you've used a reflection, it's not all gelling together very well. Maybe try playing around with the hue-sat levels of the girl and add some filters and highlights to her to make her look like she belongs in this pink, dreamy universe.
I would remove the white edges around the orange butterfly and adjust the shadow underneath the bird (maybe try a different blend mode?) I'm not too sure about the transparency of the model, but i think it;s a really nice idea, and your smudged background in the sbs looks great
author says:
Thanks for suggestions, made some little adjustments to the original image.
this is very nice idea,colors are matched very well...i am not sure is that what u want but there is a lot masking problems...on girl stomach,right arm and on background...if u want that effect then i understand but IMHO would be better if u clean this author...Sorry for nit picks...
author says:
erathion: I did not want to take away some of the source image from the image of the girl. That masking was intentional. I wanted this image to look as it is. If I clean the masking over the girl's body, it would look as if she was floating in the air. I just wanted some blending of the source image over the girl.... thanks for suggestions any way.
It is beautiful but I wish I could see more detail in your main subject. Maybe if you selectively increase the contrast and saturation in some areas, it won't feel as washed-out. The blending of her dress against the background could be improved as well.
Beautiful image, however can't but to notice that the girl's reflection is positioned directly below her as if it were a shadow.If that is a reflection then it lines up with the base of the street light which would then make her just as tall as the light post or even taller...Its a great composition none the less...great job! best of luck!
very nice image, great use of the source, I would loose step 14 in the sbs, the extra snow / light bulbs, they don't do it for me, but that is my opinion! Never the less I like it anyway, good luck author!
very nice author
nice work author...best of luck
thnx for the comment
This is not bad, except for her reflection on the puddle, a few masking problems and the minimal use of the source.
Instead the mood & composition work well.
This is a very nice composition but i have to agree with Greymval, the source provided for the contest played a very small roll in this....you could have just as easily done with out it.
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