(5 years and 3227 days ago)
A Knight Who Said Ni !! LOL great film!! and great monster too of course
"Not Waving but Drowning"
by Stevie Smith
Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he's dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.
Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning.
(5 years and 3230 days ago)
very interesting creation...its a bit confusing but the idea is very unique...gl
very nice chaotic oic
I like your thinking and idea here. Perhaps if you give the top area of film where it curls some lightness...brighter. If you gradually make the inside of the curl darker it'll give the image some depth...which I think is why for some it may seem chaotic. Nice work, author!
Points for concept for sure ... very unusual take on the source.
thanks arca...pixelkid...enblanco....erathion..i will work on lights ,,thanks for the comments
nice entry
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