In all honesty, author i felt it looked better without all the splatter. At the moment it feels very chaotic. However, it's your piece and i can't tell you what to do
i agree with nisha. i like you concept, definitely, but just a few little things i might add... bringing some of the brick texture up onto the face to blend it in better...some shadows and stuff...and then, also, blur the horizon so it gives it more depth. also..and not to be picky, but just trying to help... i think the yellow of the stones going into the water is too bright. perhaps lower the saturation so it blends better with the image as a whole.
author says:
Thanks for the comments, I tried to fix must or you suggestions - the bricks on the face are still stumping me though...
You've done a lot of cool work here which would be easier to appreciate if you included an SBS. I'm not sure I agree with the relative simplicity of the foreground/midground against the complexity of the background. The perfectly horizontal panels in the door are at odds with the tilted horizon in the background.
huge awesomeness!!! (IMHO.. a little more smudge around the whole face (CAREFUL THOUGH, I always go overboard) .. but a very soft smudge brush over all the sharper edges of that adorable face you have created will just increase the result (and get off your lazy butt and make an SBS.. this really deserves one, and I know that LOTS of peeps would like to see the details of creation...
very, Very, VERY!!!!! great work.. and good luck
(the composition and idea is really well thought out.. the elongated face makes it very unique (resisting the round orb baby effect is very hard and you pulled it off beautifully.)
WEEEEEEEEE!!!! SO MUCH MORE FLUFFY.. hehehe.. it was great before, but much nicer now.. Now I really wanna pet him.. hehehe.. good luck author.. awesome job!!!
author says:
ahahha thx for ur comment drivenslush! I smudged the face a little just like u said hope its better now, hope to add a sbs before saturday, im off the next few days but i try
this is cool image, i think it would look better and more on theme if you cut his head off.
( hmm that didn't came out right )
just changed the idea !!! maybe next time
In all honesty, author i felt it looked better without all the splatter. At the moment it feels very chaotic. However, it's your piece and i can't tell you what to do
Good luck.
I really liked to first entry.. just removing the head would have been sufficient.. then again.. it is all your vision Author.... then fine by me
This is effective and cool. I like that it's greyscale.
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