very nice job on the folds in the shirt -- only one on the left seem to cross (small thing but)

darts Alan, darts

you still have time to make the zipper center and follow the alimentary canal for consistancy.. up to you.. good luck

LOL!

o my...is this his birthday present...lol...gl author

yes .. remember the saying "you can have your cake and eat it too"

just a suggestion author.. if you added a bit of bevel emboss to the frame (and a few white light streaks blurred to give lacquer light reflection as well) and a light BW gradient fill to the interior of the screen I'd think you get a more popping image..(you could even use a very soft BURN brush along the inner edge of the screen to give it a bit of a vignette too) IMHO.. I really do love the use of an old type writer .. I miss mine (lost it in Andrew).. good luck author