trim49, you forgot that his chest is too small, his legs are way too thick, his glasses make no sense and his cape is too heavy, his hair is too fluffy, his head is too big (I enlarged it) his shoes don't match, and the underline is too thick (all done on purpose by the way).. (you forgot the sign on the restaurant is too blurry)
Just a suggestion trim49, try to use a crowbar on your imagination, your comment lacks any kind of inspiration or helpfulness... basically it's negative and mean (terse comments are useless and hurtful) now if you would have followed up with a solution to the issue that would have been a great help... it would show some sort of thought behind your comment
I modeled the tie after DOCTOR WHO, so in this case THE SCARF IS TOO SMALL IN THE IMAGE.. but that's your right to comment, just as it is MY RIGHT to comment right back
(Lighten up and just enjoy the concept, loosening the stick would help too) if everything was perfect and the way you want it, the world would be a very boring place indeed
Dramatic and a welcome departure from the same old same-old. Nevertheless, I'm not sure I really get it and I feel like the contest source is secondary at best (i.e., virtually any source could have been squeezed into this).
author says:
It was the small flowers on the ornament, that made me think of summer and they are very feminin.
And how can't you get summer?(I don't get that ;D)
I never got a plan for what I wanna do, so NO not any pic can be squezzed in. Because the ornament pic made me make this pic. ;D
The linework outline of the turtle is very choppy and crude. You might want to smooth is some.
author says:
thanks for your comment mossy. the lines are very choppy cause their hand drawn. i left it there to leave the cartoon'ish factor on the picture. like a small fary tale in the real world i think if i smooth them i will loose a bit of that effect.
you could put a shadow under the turtle if you want to ground him a bit (not too dark, just a gauss blurred disk underneath him blended into the grass, also your hand drawn lines are awesome.. (you can see them great in HIGH RES) you might want to think about doing the same thing to the background, trace around the edges of the trees with the same type of lines.. just a thought, something I would do to make it look entirely like a cartoon.. love the shading on the turtle... as always IMHO
EDIT: GREATLY IMPROVED.. it really looks like a story book illustration now.. good luck author and good work!!!
author says:
thanks for the great advice Drivenslush! hope you like the new version
Love the humor here author... GL!
The scarf is too large in the image.
trim49, you forgot that his chest is too small, his legs are way too thick, his glasses make no sense and his cape is too heavy, his hair is too fluffy, his head is too big (I enlarged it) his shoes don't match, and the underline is too thick (all done on purpose by the way).. (you forgot the sign on the restaurant is too blurry)
Just a suggestion trim49, try to use a crowbar on your imagination, your comment lacks any kind of inspiration or helpfulness... basically it's negative and mean (terse comments are useless and hurtful) now if you would have followed up with a solution to the issue that would have been a great help... it would show some sort of thought behind your comment
I modeled the tie after DOCTOR WHO, so in this case THE SCARF IS TOO SMALL IN THE IMAGE.. but that's your right to comment, just as it is MY RIGHT to comment right back
(Lighten up and just enjoy the concept, loosening the stick would help too) if everything was perfect and the way you want it, the world would be a very boring place indeed
so funny!
Androloa, thank you so very much
very nice, good luck!
Haha love the expression
I want his socks
Hilarious - LOL@Lafonda!!!!
Great copywriting and shadows.
Howdie stranger!
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