it may be my eyes.. but the string is confusing the image.. to me it looks like the dog is far far away, floating over the water... but the string reels it in and makes it seem like we should think the dog balloon is sitting right next to the human subject.. and it doesn't work.. if you made the string's perspective running out to the water... a very difficult proposition but it can be achieved...(lots of shear for wiggle and perspective for dof) I just feel like the dog is chasing the birdies but the string/leash doesn't look right..
sorry.. it's a great image, but it's visually confusing.. if you describe what you were trying to achieve I think that will help.. good LUCK!! and great job
author says:
I guess I did not know very well what to do and can not tell if it's still good! Thanks
thin the strings author... you got something great here.. only need a tad bit of improvement... (google MACY's DAY PARADE BALLOONS to get an idea of the thinness needed to create the proper idea)
Great idea ... can only get better
author says:
Thanx Drivenslush.... just made the changes hope it looks better now..... thanx for the Google reference....
it may be my eyes.. but the string is confusing the image.. to me it looks like the dog is far far away, floating over the water... but the string reels it in and makes it seem like we should think the dog balloon is sitting right next to the human subject.. and it doesn't work.. if you made the string's perspective running out to the water... a very difficult proposition but it can be achieved...(lots of shear for wiggle and perspective for dof) I just feel like the dog is chasing the birdies but the string/leash doesn't look right..
sorry.. it's a great image, but it's visually confusing.. if you describe what you were trying to achieve I think that will help.. good LUCK!! and great job
I guess I did not know very well what to do and can not tell if it's still good! Thanks
nice one...fantastic blend...gl
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