nice idea the manipulation of the elephants is good -- you need to adjust your shadows as the light in the source is form the lower left (See the shadow of the tree on the left for reference). Also the shadows are too far away form the elephants giving them a floating appearance. The shadow of the table is not attached at both legs
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Thanks kushpatel and Alan2641 ....Alan I adjusted shadows I seem to have trouble sometimes with prospective on them I redid any better?
Your entries and artistry are unique... this one is great... best of luck author!
p.s. actual cards or chess pieces would be really awesome here... keep up the great work...
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woodztockr First of all Thanks. I redid before because of shadows and I forgot to put cards back on table So Thanks when I saw your comment I said opps..lol so heres the cards back on the table
the stands are a bit out of perspective with the ground -- a bit of rotation would improve them -- need some shadows to fix them to the ground -- a bit of dodge ( in the middle) and burn (on the outside edges) would also give then to depth as they seem to lack any depth
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Thanks Guys Hows this Alan2641 I did over any better?
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really neat idea (links aren't working for me... please check).. if you could brighten/dodge the gray elephants a bit (I like to see their detail more, they are a bit dark.. and watch the white grass at their feet (a soft light blended green brush would do the trick in a second.. I think it would help a lot.. but that's just me
Super nice image.. GOOD LUCK
EDIT : MUCH IMPROVED.. good luck!!!
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Thank you Drivenslush, I have made some adjustments!
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The black background makes the dome look too cut and paste flat. Perhaps a starry sky from Nasa.gov would help.
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Thanks for the suggestions folks. I've only slightly warpped the elephants and added a bit more noise etc to the background. I'm just a little cautious about putting in a really good background in case in takes away the focus from the main objects.
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wonderful and funny!!!! good luck!!!!
Thank You Androla
very funny like your entry
nice idea the manipulation of the elephants is good -- you need to adjust your shadows as the light in the source is form the lower left (See the shadow of the tree on the left for reference). Also the shadows are too far away form the elephants giving them a floating appearance. The shadow of the table is not attached at both legs
Thanks kushpatel and Alan2641 ....Alan I adjusted shadows I seem to have trouble sometimes with prospective on them I redid any better?
Your entries and artistry are unique... this one is great... best of luck author!
p.s. actual cards or chess pieces would be really awesome here... keep up the great work...
woodztockr First of all Thanks. I redid before because of shadows and I forgot to put cards back on table So Thanks when I saw your comment I said opps..lol so heres the cards back on the table
Cute fun entry author,look good GL
Thanks mishti
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