Cool idea. I like the non-traditional use of orange, but the sky seems kind of blah and in need of more-dramatic saturation. Compositionally, the centering of the sun, city, and foreground UFO is also kind of blah. (I'd move the sun left and the front UFO right for a diagonal composition—which would require a sun reflection in the water since the UFO shadow would no longer block it.) The identical blurring of the lights of each of the UFOs regardless of their distance from the viewer/photographer weakens their impact IMO.
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Thank you very much for your views on this DanLundberg I will take all your advice onboard
I think you're just trying to hard MossyB. It's blurry because it's running... I think the only problem is the lighting on the rhino. otherwise, it looks sick!
Naaah, fr33rider2, it's blurry, but NOT in a motion blur type of way. It's blurry as in not as focused as the rest of the surrounding image...
Consistent focus is part of the criteria of a successful chop, not just the concept.
I disagree with moe, the idea is not horrible. Disturbing, yes, but not horrible. My only suggestion, like moe said; the baby is too big (or the truck too small). Good luck author!
great work...link 4 doesnt work..
edit yeah it works now
thank you nisha . now its ok.
I'm curious how a letter-box format fits into your dreams. The Rule of Thirds (i.e., move her to the right) would yield a more dramatic image IMO.
Wow, it's poetry, GL!!
thank you!
great entry gl author
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