suggestions:
1) underwater feel, should include glistening to the mermaid
2) make hair more "lighter" (now looks heavy, too thick) and free flowing
3) the dangling sea-plants should have different shades of green to create depth
4) trailing bubbles around arms and tail, to create sense of movement
5) lift up the abdomen of the mermaid to make her more shapely
6) add some fish near her, both infront and behind her
hope these suggestions are useful
author says:
thank you both for the great feedback... I took note of what you said and made changes.
hehehe.. (I would get rid of the two white paper sheets behind the warrior.. just burn them or clone them out, or turn them into papyrus or something .. they just don't fit the awesome mood you created.. but that could be me.. GREAT JOB!!
(they center him great, but they look to modern to me )
(YES.. the paper is gone and the image is fantastic now.. GOOD LUCK)
author says:
Thanks Drivenslush, I have removed 2 white paper sheet from background.
This is very lovely, but the dream catcher is too close to the woman, it looks like the feathers are balancing the entire thing on the top of her head...
That's absolutely creative, well done!
Diligent use of source author! Decent outcome too!
most unique in this contest so far
Nice one!
Ohhhh WOOF !!!!! Great Work!!!
fade the furs around his face and body since it is a dog, now looks cut-out
drop shadow below dog to be added, according to light direction
Wouldn't mind having such a cute guard dog
well done congrats nice
Congrats, nice work
Congrats on your FiRST place... Wonderful entry.
Congrats!
cool one! congrats!
Howdie stranger!
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