Extremely creative and fun! Her strong shadow on the wall might suggest a bit more bang shadow on her forehead, chin shadow on her neck, and pearls shadow on her neck and the wall. A string connecting the pearls might be nice, as well. I would be tempted to crop the image just below the pearls as that portion is kind of creepy IMO.
IMO one of the planes should be lighter, otherwise well made.
author says:
Thanks CMYK46 for your comment, I thought about it and agreed that the writing area should be a little lighter than the back. So I lightened that area, but I didn't like the color, so I did the reverse and darkened the wood at the back behind the drawers slightly, I think it has improved and it makes the drawers stand out more too.
beautiful scene and lovely colors...best of luck author
So beautiful...
So Nice.. All the Best author
The birds are simply stunning
Howdie stranger!
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