The blur of the bird is inconsistent with the cup and beans being so sharp in focus.

er... is it better to drink coffee than eat the coffee beans?

need to improve the bird's eye

Lovely...

if can add some flapping wings (motion blur) may be better

like the color-play on the birds n sky

Very nice!!!

thanks

if possible, vary the birds by distorting the wings.

in flight, they will not have the same-thing like wings all upwards

should fade (blur) some birds to create a notion of distance (far n near(

The background is very crude looking, and even with the reflections, the stools look like they are floating. The separation line between the wall and the floor is almost in the center of your image, a compositional "no no," as it bisects the image.
It's an original idea, but the techinical execution leaves something to be desired, and only using the source image does not warrant much.

Author, if you only use the source image, you HAVE to create at least a 2-step SBS. Read the Rules and Guidelines.

Creative idea, nice execution. Now post an SBS so your entry doesn't get yanked...

Done ,