Pretty cool! Your SBS doesn't explain, but I assume you hand-drew this. The top four lines of the background ['Serbia' spelled with a V?] are like rows of brickwork aside from the falling 'USA,' but the rest of the rows seem to be crumbling and possibly incomplete at the bottom. The mandatory PXL logo actually seems out of place. Maybe a mini version in a bottom corner would be better.
author says:
@Dan: there's a source given... a mini version of the logo at the bottom doesn't work and I do not want a small logo on it. You are right about the top looking like brickwork, wasn't intended like that, I fix that later on as well as the spelling error, thanks for pointing that out.
Perhaps a much bigger PXL logo so your text is more clearly background (e.g., starts below the top of the logo)? It does appear that you did adjust the kerning of the font to add drama-- very nice.
Letter P -- not riding --
and car too red
shadow of the car ....... on a shirt ? maybe ......
but wait ...................................... it is cool and it is my fav
author says:
@ Mossy, the logo is distorted because I had to face them with the car.
@ designed, desaturated the car and I think it is now better. Car looked very floating without the shadow so it stays. And the letter P is riding, look at the high resolution.
Thank you both for your input.
The target circle echos are a bit distracting, but I really like the overall shape of this!
thanks MossyB...
nice work...
simple and effective
thanks passionboy and mehul..
I want to see it printed on shirt. Simple yet great! Good luck author. 1 fav here and a high vote...
thanks Bernie...
Howdie stranger!
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