The back light glow is a bit too intense around the butt and left leg, while non-existent anywhere else, which makes it somewhat distracting. The lighting on the top front of the face (see the reflection on the mask), and the top right of the arms is also inconsistent and confusing with such a strong back light...

Excellent Work..you're right, it was a dynamic pose, but u did an excellent job transforming her and placing her in a simple but very fitting background..GL

Thanks for the feed back! and I appreciate the constructive criticism Mossy. I see now what you were saying. I finished it very late at night and after seeing it with fresh eyes in the morning you were right about the back light being over done. Also, I agree about the glare in the middle of the mask, but I removed it and it just seemed to take away from the image, so I just toned it down a bit.

I'm with Nator ...you should have kept the glare

I put the glare half way back thanks for your input everyone!!!

very dramatic feel, good work.

awsm!!

If I were the model, I would have this hanging on my wall. This is terrific!

Thanks!!! I sent it to her maybe she will

Congrats for 1st place, super pic

Congrats Robert excellent work

Thank you thank you!

congrats!! cool n amazing

A lot of work in this one, but the results are stunning.

IMO best so far...GL author!

So many elements to create the style/personality and then positioned in an appropriate background clearly warrents an AWESOME!

Nice work! I might have removed some from the wall (left side), since nothing really happens there. By cropping it, there might be more balance in the whole image, which could make the girl look even better. Good luck!

Great composition which has been well put together

I agree with wazowski that not much is happening on the left side and that balance is a good thing, but the Rule of Thirds is about the drama/tension of assymetry/imbalance which I think is captured here (to echo solkee).

I like the overall looks of the image but the face and hair seems a bit off to me. It appears the face is set off to the right side without any hair showing on that side . But the clothing is well done

Wow. Very cool goth look, well done, author.

wow amazing work
high vote and fav

the hand jewel thingy is pretty cool.. good luck!

I would clone out the white bra straps, but otherwise, this is a very good effort!

good job with matching the pieces!!

nice work