A bit too dark around the edges - The bottom looks too much like a dark line, which draws the eye away from the focal point of the swans and emphasizes the excess dead space on the sides. It would look stronger to just crop the sides, and lighten the "mood" by about half.
To me, this would be more dramatic if the two were face-to-face (both pure profile) rather than having the lion being off to the side while she looks past it. Darkening the background would make the foreground figures stand out more.
Great subject mater, looks cool. You ought to upload a HiRes.
earth too sharp........maybe u need to motion blur a bit.........
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